Hi, friends. Seeking your input on my newest song. Gemma at gemz16 sent me these lovely words and challenged me to use them in a song:
She sits alone, rain pours around her,
her broken face is quite a picture.
Holding back tears cause of what she’s done,
she had no control, and she starts to run.
I asked why she’s crying, and Gemma admitted the plot wasn’t clear to her when she penned these words. So, I thought I’d ask all of you: what has this girl done? Be creative; make up her crime! I may not discuss her mistake explicitly in the song lyrics, but I need to have a mistake in mind while I’m writing—to feel for for this girl.